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This is such a sweet song. I got chills when you sing "for you", it is so honest and pure. Your singing in the second verse might be the best delivery I’ve ever heard from you, it literally made me stop and rewind to listen again.
Do me a favor when you get the guitar in your hand again and try dropping this line: "Give me a sign I’ll be yours, Forever more" I have a feeling that by shortening the bridge and not giving the listener the expected line there, it will make the chorus even more impacting when it arrives. Oh, one other thing, I hear the song ending on the chorus progression with a banjo plucking along. It sounds AWESOME in my head. ;-)
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thanks a mil justin, i see where your going with losing that line and i think it could work alright. ill defo play it out that way and see how it sounds later. thanks man! appreciate your support as always !
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TheMusicLadder commented 1 year ago
thanks man!
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Tony Floyd Kenna commented 1 year ago
Nice work Ciaran..passion!
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Tony Floyd Kenna commented 1 year ago
He knows words white man .....
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The one who walks with no sound does not speak my tongue. I will use sign language. LOL
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ronirelandmusic commented 1 year ago
Man, this is a great, great, hook, right here:
Your the beat in my heart your the air that I breathe The time of my life your the world to me I believe in true love and I found it in you theres nothing more that I wouldn’t do for you
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ronirelandmusic commented 1 year ago
You did a great job on this song, it’s got passion and a memorable melody
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thanks Ron that’s very much appreciated coming from you! that’s definitely my fav part of this song.. not sure how happy i am with it as it stands overall but definitely the chorus I like !
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ronirelandmusic commented 1 year ago
I like the song a lot, Ron, but only you will know when it is where you want it. I think the chorus is melodically and lyrically great.
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TheHaycroft commented 1 year ago
Good song and a great performance Ciaran ..Regards Paul
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0421steppenwolf commented 1 year ago
Great song and great performance.
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sassysd_2011 commented 1 year ago
another favorite!
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IkerCedeno commented 1 year ago
always a pleasure to listening to you!
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sherrillwallace commented 1 year ago
Good song. Very nice presentation, you got soul! Sherrill
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OneWomanAndSomeSongs commented 1 year ago
Hey, Ciaran, it’s great to see you on MT. What a cool original. Your playing is just fantastic here, and your vocals sound really great too. Nice lyrics too! And thanks for the sub. I’m subbing you back. :) Janet
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